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Title: Bad Habit (adults only).
Series: Leather in Lawnville. This series follows the adventures of a suburbanite with leather boots and a hidden hanky. You do not need to have read the other stories in the series to understand this one.
Summary: A leatherman shows off his boy to a skeptic.
First paragraph: "Lawnville's Hamburger Palace is the sort of place where opposites meet. You come here for Saturday lunch, and you'll see three-piece-suited businessmen eating with rednecks, housewives eating with long-haired artsy guys, and a homophobe eating with the local pervert."
Tags for this story (with minor spoilers).
May 18 2006, 16:00:59 UTC 6 years ago
i wonder at part of the stoy where You write:
"I turned my attention to Randy. "Boy, fetch Mr. Steinman some mayonnaise."
In the end Montgomery goes and fetches his own maonnaise.
Did You intend to make that switch?
butterfly
May 18 2006, 16:55:21 UTC 6 years ago
"In the end Montgomery goes and fetches his own maonnaise. Did You intend to make that switch?"
Shall I blame that one on my Muse? No, it was a slip on my part. You're right, the narrator should have nudged Randy again to fetch the mayo. Possibly his mind was distracted by the trouble Randy was causing him.
Anonymous
May 18 2006, 17:02:25 UTC 6 years ago
i was a little worried that i would offend by the comment so i am pleased that i was helpful. Yes, it was probably Randys fault, he seemed to have a hard time remembering to behave himself. i like that about him.
butterfly
May 18 2006, 17:22:44 UTC 6 years ago
I resist the impulse to go read more of your LJ to see what your domestic life is like. Bet it's amusing, though.
"i was a little worried that i would offend by the comment so i am pleased that i was helpful."
Here's what's in the "send e-mail" section of my main fiction Website, Master/Other:
"If you send me pretty compliments, I will print your letter out and frame it above my computer. (This isn't much of an exaggeration.) If, on the other hand, you send me a letter that begins, 'What kind of nit-witted writer are you? You gave your character blue eyes in scene one and green eyes in scene two!' then I will raise up a shrine in your honor and burn candles upon your altar."
Consider your shrine to be under construction.
May 18 2006, 16:42:39 UTC 6 years ago
I'm working my way through your stuff, and I have to say that it is refreshingly orginal, and that it's a very nice switch from all the fanfiction. Orginal stuff (especially contemporarily set orginal stuff) has such a different feel than fanfic.
Man, makes me want to write more orginal stuff...
May 18 2006, 16:58:48 UTC 6 years ago
Well, you know which story I'd like to see finished. Here's my updated online homoerotic fiction recs list with you listed on it, by the way. The Index is also listed.
http://duskpeterson.com/treasure/
May 18 2006, 17:04:09 UTC 6 years ago
One thing; "Drive By Porning" isn't the title of that thing (I didn't have a title at the time). Is there a chance you could change it to "Jump" ?
(And I TOTALLY didn't get that it was the jump story that you wanted me to finish. ::blush:: I'm... Wow. Thanks. Did you see the second part to that, by any chance?)
May 18 2006, 17:24:39 UTC 6 years ago
Ah, so there was a second part. I searched for it but didn't find it. Where is it so that I can link to it?
Title changed in the meantime.
May 18 2006, 17:32:58 UTC 6 years ago
That one is het (technicaly) but Dective Watts is IN her head, so I still think of it as homoerotic. Plus, she's got a strapon...
My god, I'm a sick fuck sometimes. ::hides head::
I'm going to put these in my memories, because I keep forgetting to do that.
Thank you again for the rec!